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Literature Text


you've got the rain following you
around like a sad tune
dancing atop of clouds
the
crows are loosing
feathers like
petals
off of flowers.

[it's melancholy .]
© 2014 - 2024 keiranikaela
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Moosezoomin's avatar
:jawdrop:

This is exactly the kind of poetry I love: brief, poignant, deep, where every word screams a thousand and more.  Fantastic!