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April 26, 2014
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i'd like to see the stars, fall
and kiss the
moon.
i'd make a wish as they'd shatter its glow
into a million little pieces, and
scatter
across the seas.
one day, these lights will go
out; one day, that wish will come
true.

[shut your eyes and imagine
the end]
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capricecake Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Student Writer
i did it, i imagined. :heart:
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innoctemn Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
keep it true to your heart, and never let it go. <3
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KTierson Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Potent wordplay and imagery.
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innoctemn Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014
thankyou.:huggle:
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KTierson Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome! Keep up the great work!
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KJHartnett Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow... :jawdrop:
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A-Shadow-Rose Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I think I'm in love... with your poem of course. :blush: It's absolutely beautiful. :heart:
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innoctemn Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
thankyou.:huggle:
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A-Shadow-Rose Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome! :tighthug:
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XTRQS Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
Love this.
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innoctemn Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
thankyou. :huggle:
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
But... Who will be there to see it?  
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innoctemn Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
whoever is lucky enough to see it... i suppose
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Math-Mage Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
I...I...I can't help it.

*its

(Apologies if I'm undermining poetic license.)
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innoctemn Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
thankyou, it's fixed now :huggle:
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givemeyourscars Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's a piece brimming with imagery and sweet words that just help it achieve that dreamy vision in my opinion. I think it's a wonderful piece of writing!
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innoctemn Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
:huggle:
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Mageofcats Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student General Artist
I love the ending.

That is the reason for my favorite.

Please. Do not respond. I will trap you in a loop of

Never ending conversation. You will really dislike it.
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innoctemn Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014
i'm sorry... i couldn't resist^-^ thankyou. :huggle:
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Mageofcats Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Yay! Hugs! I like hugs! =P

I should tell you that I also like your avatar picture thingy.
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innoctemn Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014
^-^thankyou!
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