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You struck a chord in my soul.
Now it rings in my ears,
a sickly
sweet melody that deafens
the pain
screams louder now can't hear it's own
voice.
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wdnest Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Professional Writer
Lovely work  - stunning.
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SolidMars Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
really strong poem, short, but strong. great work :clap:
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innoctemn Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
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ChristopherGrey Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very strong opening! A soul should never be kept quite.
"Now it screams!"
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innoctemn Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014
thankyou.
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ArcNovaXIII Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
great descriptive voice, it looks so great!
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innoctemn Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014
thankyou.
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